Question by Ariunzaya: Can you please check this text's grammar and spelling?

And if you could change some of the words to sophisticated words.

Human Trafficking is when people are illegally encountered from one country to another country; a young children and women who are in a need of money, are promised to have a happy life, working in a foreign country. I believe that children who are aged 9 or 10 working in a sweat shop or factory is
extremely dreadful. Another factor to be considered is that girls from Phillipine and Pakistan are forced into prostitution, sex trade for those rich people, moreover, young girls are working as a slave and cleaner.




Best answer:

Answer by ♫Penny♫
Human Trafficking is -where- people are illegally transported from one country to another usually for purposes like the Sex Trade, forced labour and child soldiery. For example, woman may be promised a better life for themselves and their children by working in a foreign country, usually not fully realizing what is involved in the situation presented. I believe that children having to work in sweat shops and factories is extremely dreadful. Another factor to consider is that young girls/women are being brought from places such as Pakistan and the Philippines and being forced into prostitution, Sex trades or general slavery.


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